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A shower of glass was suddenly launched into the air, soon cascading to the ground. All down the street, front doors began to open and people came out of their houses in dressing gowns and pyjamas, wondering what on earth the noise was. The police cars all rolled to a stop, and officers jumped out armed wih dangerous weapons. A huge array of dogs accompanied them not long after. But everything began to blur up in Jack’s sight, as he saw how bad the damage was to Darren’s car. There was no way he could have survived the crash. Rain mixed with tears seeped down his cheeks. He knew that Jack was a very bad man, but he could not help but feel sorry for him after all that they’d been through.
The dogs began to howl. But their mournful tones started to melt into a very strange noise. Almost like… a whining cat! Jack opened his eyes. He sat up and looked around. He seemed to be still lying in his garden. Amber was sitting next to him whining and whinging, trying to wake Jack up. Jack rubbed his head- he must have hit it on something and been knocked out. Come to think of it… there was a small tree resting right next to him. He got up and picked Amber of the ground, then began to walk back towards his house. Jack’s dream was slowly coming back to him now. He thought it had something to do with all the cats acting strangely, his neighbour Darren, and a lot of police dogs. Jack scratched Amber’s head as he opened the back door.
“Listen, do I have a story to tell you!”
THE END
October 2nd, 2008 at 6:06 pm
Very good! I liked that story. You could actually do very well as an author! If you set your mind to something you can do anything! You should start another one!!!
October 4th, 2008 at 5:35 pm
Seems like you are a very good writer, Is writing your favourite subject? What do you think your best story you have written is about?
Lisa
October 8th, 2008 at 6:24 pm
Hi Hayley
Nicely done! Oh my… he died? How scary! I was freaked out, but when I found out it was a dream, I was relieved. What a wonderful story! I am sure glad to have read it! The ending was great, especially the awesome twists which were shocking!!
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Nadine