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Beneath the Raindrops (a random little story) Chapter 7

Filed Under (Miscellaineous) by Hayley on 05-09-2008



Darren and Jack climbed the staircase to the outside world, and trudged over to Darren’s beat up green van. Jack, following Darren’s lead, threw his bag into the backseat and hopped inside.

“So, where exactly are we going, Darren?” Jack asked.

Darren laughed. “Right to the edge of our town, young man!”

He revved up his engine and the van started to creep along the driveway, windows rattling. Jack breathed a sigh of relief once they reached the road, for he knew that he wouldn’t be in danger of waking up his sleeping parents anymore.

Ten minutes later, the roads started to turn more dusty. Jack poked his head out the open window and could smell the scent of dryed up shrubs. The dark landscape in front of them displayed a desert-like scene. Jack’s thoughts were suddenly halted- he could actually hear the chirping sound of cicadas! Up until now, the harsh rain had blocked out any noise except raindrops clashing with materials. But the rain had stopped, and Jack could even detect a flowery scent among the smell of dryed shrubs.

The old green van slowed to a stop, and Darren jumped out the door, beckoning Jack to follow him.

“Grab the bags on your way out!” he called, and Jack obeyed. Jack and Darren started to trek across the desert. They stopped walking around fifteen minutes later.

“Here we are!” said Darren. Suddenly, a mournful howl consumed their ears. All too quickly, silhouettes of large animals appeared on the horizon.

“Darren! What do we do?!” Jack shrieked.

To be continued…

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3 Responses to “Beneath the Raindrops (a random little story) Chapter 7”

  1.   millyr3 Says:

    Wow! This is coming along to be a very cool story! I had only originally read the first two chapters but I had to go back and read the rest! Its like reading something out of the libray! I really must remember to come back every week and read the next chapter!

  2.   Lynne Crowe Says:

    You have cleverly woven excitement and suspense into this story. Well done.

  3.   Nadine Says:

    Excellent!! I can smell the scent of flowers around me.. I hope Darren knows what he’s doing and that they’ll be able to tackle what’s coming straight away and without getting hurt.
    Great writing, you’ve done so well!! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter..
    Stay In Touch
    Nadine :P

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