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Jack scrambled out of his chair, dusted himself off- then stopped.
“Darren? How do we get out?” he inquired.
“Ah.” said Darren. “I forgot to mention that. There’s a staircase over there.” He pointed to the far corner of the room. Jack couldn’t believe he hadn’t noticed it before! Jack thanked and told Darren that he would see him later, and climbed up the staircase. He heaved open the trapdoor that appeared above him, and poked his head out. He seemed to be on the edge of Darren’s garden. He scrambled up and out, while closing the trapdoor behind him. The garden was a beautiful sight, even in the, still wet, darkness. Jack could tell that it looked spectacular during Spring. He ran across the garden and jumped the fence into his backyard.
As he was about to take a step forward his foot connected with something squishy- and soft. Amber! She screeched and ran towards the back door. Jack followed her, opened the door and she dashed inside. Jack glanced at the clock- 11:00pm. He set his watch to go off at 5:15am. Then he threw on some pyjamas and settled in for the night.
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Bleep! Bleep! Bleep! Jack’s watch woke him a with a fright. It was still dark and rainy outside. He rolled out of his bed and toppled onto the floor. He knew he wouldn’t have any time for breakfast, so instead just quietly put some clothes on, being wary of the fact that his parents were still sound asleep.
I suppose I’d better get ready. Jack thought, and spotted his backpack by the door. He threw in some food from the fridge and his drink bottle. He also included his pocket knife set. The door loomed appealingly at him, so he gave up on doing anything else and exited the house.
Back in his study, Darren was waiting excitedly for Jack. As soon as he arrived, Darren lept out of his chair.
“Okay mate, let’s go!”
September 3rd, 2008 at 3:37 pm
Beautiful..
I see you’ve added great description, with awesome twists to the story and great characters. I really wonder where Jack and Darren are going? Can’t wait for this next chpater.
Very excited. Though don’t leave me waiting long okay?
P.S Lovely Title
Kisses, Nadine
September 7th, 2008 at 3:36 pm
I think I am going to have to print all the chapters so that I can clearly follow what is happening! I keep forgetting what has happened in previous chapters.